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Historical Fiction · Western
The Catclaw Line
Texas, 1881. Cattleman Cal Whitlock finds a company-red locating stake in his north fence — the railroad has already chosen this grass. Getting the line is a real win. It still does not name everyone who paid for it.
“Cal Whitlock stood twenty feet from the wire, the sun baking the alkali dust into his skin.”
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Chapter 18 — The Cost
Read from Chapter 18
Cal Whitlock stood twenty feet from the wire, the sun baking the alkali dust into his skin. A standoff pulsed in the silence between him and the man at the fence, a tension as physical as the low, rhythmic thrumming of the herd pushing the air out of the narrow pass. Ezra Steele held the ridge, rifle leveled at the skyline, while Tomás Reyna watched the confrontation with a hand braced against his thigh. Behind Cal, Grady Ferris held his position, eyes wide and fixed on the man across the gap, the boy's breath coming in shallow, quick bursts.
The man at the wire, Miller, shifted his weight, the shotgun barrel dipping slightly as he prepared to fire. His knuckles were white against the wood of the stock.
"I won't be the one to lose his ground again!" Miller shouted.
Cal gave no verbal reply, only a slight shake of his head. He watched the way the man's shoulders bunched—not with the practiced ease of a hired hand, but with the frantic, jagged energy of a man cornered. It wasn't Teague's money Miller was defending; he was fighting for the simple, terrified need to hold a line that wouldn't move.
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